In this paper I will be telling you on why I should deserve a better grade than I am currently getting. With my participation in class and the amount of research and work I have done on my papers make a strong argument for me getting a better grade. I will first talk about my article I shared in class and then talk about the Wall Street Journal assignment, ending with my resume. Then to close out the paper, I will talk about what grade I am currently getting and why I should be higher. With the article that I shared in class, it was a really last minute thing that I found. I always look on google news and mainly read the headlines to see what’s going on in the world. I read the ones that catch my eyes and do further research on the topic
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I deserve a much better grade on this than you gave me. I do hours upon hours of research to really make it seem like I could be a real world company that built batteries for Tesla Motors. And with the Volkswagen diesel scandal, it really made my research get much more in depth to filter through everything that was being said, as it was be updated very often as more information came out. I went through three of four renditions of the paper till I had to call it quits on the research and use the information that I already had to do my letter. I also knew my grammar within the paper wasn’t the best, so I went to the writing center provided by the school to get help and make sure my grammar was correct and the paper flowed nicely. After my time was up there, I went and did all the changes that he suggested by them that I should do to improve my paper. Yet, even after going to the writing center, that is stated in your syllabus that we should go and visit, I still failed the assignment. That isn’t right and I deserve at least a B on that assignment, as I fulfilled the assignment requirements and I went above and beyond to get my paper grammatically correct as well as the amount of research and keeping up to date with what was happening in the world as it related to my
I deserve a much better grade on this than you gave me. I do hours upon hours of research to really make it seem like I could be a real world company that built batteries for Tesla Motors. And with the Volkswagen diesel scandal, it really made my research get much more in depth to filter through everything that was being said, as it was be updated very often as more information came out. I went through three of four renditions of the paper till I had to call it quits on the research and use the information that I already had to do my letter. I also knew my grammar within the paper wasn’t the best, so I went to the writing center provided by the school to get help and make sure my grammar was correct and the paper flowed nicely. After my time was up there, I went and did all the changes that he suggested by them that I should do to improve my paper. Yet, even after going to the writing center, that is stated in your syllabus that we should go and visit, I still failed the assignment. That isn’t right and I deserve at least a B on that assignment, as I fulfilled the assignment requirements and I went above and beyond to get my paper grammatically correct as well as the amount of research and keeping up to date with what was happening in the world as it related to my