Whitby Abbey Narrative-revisions Draft
I was cold,hungry, and scared I had ran away from home. Fortunately my best friends found me and insisted on coming with me. We were 3 kids far from home and then it started thundering. So we looked for some shelter. Then we saw a sign it said welcome to whitby abbey. We realized that we had learned about that in the orphanage.
Then all of a sudden we heard sticks crackling behind us. We figured it was just a squirrel or something. Then we saw a group of kids around our age in front of a bonfire. We walked over there and asked what they were doing they said “we're trying to keep away Dracula with the light.”we said “the Legends are true?” they nodded. they asked if we wanted to stay we said “sure.” …show more content…
But there was a twist to this version of the game so since Jake said he had never ever jumped off the roof he had to then after he jumped off the roof and got back and sat down next to me I said never have I ever been to a Cemetery. then all of a sudden everyone from Whitby Abbey that was at the bonfire said it was nice meeting you, it was nice knowing you, and rest in peace.
I said what do you mean it's a confused look on my face. then they explained how the legend says that Dracula bit his first victim there. I had to go alone and by myself with no one to protect me if he did come which I highly doubt it but still. So I said goodbye to everyone then started on my way to the graveyard. But I was beginning to get the weird feeling that someone was watching me. Then I don't know where a huge black dog darts past me! I kept walking towards the graveyard finally I made it. I began to get the thought that someone was watching me again i ignored my thoughts and looked around the
I was cold,hungry, and scared I had ran away from home. Fortunately my best friends found me and insisted on coming with me. We were 3 kids far from home and then it started thundering. So we looked for some shelter. Then we saw a sign it said welcome to whitby abbey. We realized that we had learned about that in the orphanage.
Then all of a sudden we heard sticks crackling behind us. We figured it was just a squirrel or something. Then we saw a group of kids around our age in front of a bonfire. We walked over there and asked what they were doing they said “we're trying to keep away Dracula with the light.”we said “the Legends are true?” they nodded. they asked if we wanted to stay we said “sure.” …show more content…
But there was a twist to this version of the game so since Jake said he had never ever jumped off the roof he had to then after he jumped off the roof and got back and sat down next to me I said never have I ever been to a Cemetery. then all of a sudden everyone from Whitby Abbey that was at the bonfire said it was nice meeting you, it was nice knowing you, and rest in peace.
I said what do you mean it's a confused look on my face. then they explained how the legend says that Dracula bit his first victim there. I had to go alone and by myself with no one to protect me if he did come which I highly doubt it but still. So I said goodbye to everyone then started on my way to the graveyard. But I was beginning to get the weird feeling that someone was watching me. Then I don't know where a huge black dog darts past me! I kept walking towards the graveyard finally I made it. I began to get the thought that someone was watching me again i ignored my thoughts and looked around the