Personal Narrative: Valley Elementary School

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“Yahoo! Friday! Dismissal!” someone shouted happily. “Don’t forget your homework!” Mrs. Sifern reminded us. It was a really happy Friday afternoon, I was really happy too. “Buses 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 and 6 are all here, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, and 6.” It was Mr. Bratwartz, the principal’s voice. I said goodbye to my best friend, Jake. He was on bus 6. When I got on bus 5, sat on seat 13, I felt something different and I felt nervous, but I didn't see what it was. "Maybe it's wrong, let me forget it," I whispered to myself. When the bus drove far away from school, I felt thirsty but I couldn't find my lunchbox. "Nooooooooo!" I shouted, "I forget my lunchbox at school!" I shouted. This was my twenty-eighth time. Before, there was only empty …show more content…
It was very dark and it made me nervous. I didn't think about anything, ran as fast as I could toward the bus but it didn't work, the time tunnel inhaled me. I still could hear my friend Thomas who was shouting when I was trying to get out from the invincible tunnel. ...... " Where am I?" I opened my eyes. I was lying down on the sidewalk of a street and I felt very familiar. I heard everyone was speaking Chinese. I got up quickly, found the way to the community where I lived. Ten minutes later, I was standing in front of building 2. Need key? Oh, here it is. What the heck! It didn't work! "OK, here comes BEAR HAND!" I use my watch to change my hand to a bear’s hand. The door broke. I went toward the mailbox. The mailbox was opened and there were a lot of ads and envelopes in it. I threw all the ads into the trash can, got in the elevator with the rest of stuff from the mailbox and took it to floor

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