After I read the chapter 3, I decided to make some changes to the first paragraph of my Rough Draft 2 "Two Popular Commercial Promoting Values"
In the first paragraph of my essay. I rebuilt my sentences and I also decided to place in the first sentence "the topic sentence" in order to give the reader a previous idea of what the paragraph would talking about. Other thing I learned in chapter 3, to make a better relationship between the topic sentence and the thesis statement which purpose is help the reader to understand the point of the paragraph. Then also I focused a little my topic sentence.. .
The chapter 3 show me, I should to do a good relation between topic sentence y the conclusion of the paragraph, for example, In the concluding sentence,
In the first paragraph of my essay. I rebuilt my sentences and I also decided to place in the first sentence "the topic sentence" in order to give the reader a previous idea of what the paragraph would talking about. Other thing I learned in chapter 3, to make a better relationship between the topic sentence and the thesis statement which purpose is help the reader to understand the point of the paragraph. Then also I focused a little my topic sentence.. .
The chapter 3 show me, I should to do a good relation between topic sentence y the conclusion of the paragraph, for example, In the concluding sentence,