Personal Narrative: Trip To Disneyland

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My sister and I are so excited to go to Disneyland, we are going to celebrate Mom’s birthday, but then a car stopped in front of us, dad wasn’t able to stop in time karla said” Did anybody get hurt”.
“Oh! No! DAD!” Karla yelled
Mom told us” everything is going to be fine, the ambulance is on there way”.
When we got too the hospital dad looked badly injured, but we all had hope that he’ll be find. Soon we saw the doctor came out, he looked serious; as soon as mom saw him she asked impatient and worried” Is he okay , can we go see him”.
The doctor replied” I’m sorry ma’am but your husband is dead”.
“NO! NO!” she yelled as she dropped into tears, so did karla and I.
One year has past since the accident and now we are in the car going to our new home.
As we arrived
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Then there was a loud noise , it was coming from the speakers i said” Due to the new major’s rules sibling are not allow, there will be a search for all families. The youngest child will be taken”
Mom said”We need to go now, get in the car”
While she was saying that someone knocked on the door, then we heard Karla yell” Mom
Help, don’t let them take me; stop no please!”
She yelled as much as she could but they wouldn’t let her go, it just wasn’t fair. They can’t just take her like that, I cried as i saw then take her. For the rest of the day Mom and I were thinking of a way to rescue her and leave to a new town.
But as we all know the plan may fail,but we took the risk. We need to be fast they are going to kill her tomorrow. As we got there Mom left me at the back and went to distract the guards. She was brave, Braver than me for sure but she mostly hides her feeling. She looked brave when she was going towards the guards but she was as afraid as i was, but she is very determined, so she never gives up in anything.
As I went were Karla was I saw many children in there begging me to help them but

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