Personal Narrative: The Unknown

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Unknown “Okay officer I’ll tell you everything that I remember” I said. It was the year 2017. I was walking home from school with my two best friends Macy and Andy. We were on the way to my house to finish a project that was due at 12 that night, which gave us more than enough time to finish it. To get home from the school we had to cut through a huge woods called the “Unknown”. The woods was over 1000 acres large! There was many rumors about the “Unknown”, like people going missing, and people finding dead bodies, or homeless men living in the woods. The woods were full of dark and scary with many animals living in it. People came up with dumb things like bigfoot or two headed lions lived in the “Unknown”. …show more content…
We didn’t have a light but I remember I had an Ipad from school in my bag. I pulled it out and used it as a flashlight. BOOM the cave lit up like a christmas tree. Little did we know that the two headed lion was sleeping ten feet in head of us. None of us said a word for about 30 seconds. Macy whispers, “I don’t think he's alive” Then all of nowhere we watch this huge two headed lion gets up! This thing was beyond big. His foot was as big as an my calf bone, his body was the size of a jacked vending machine, his eyes (which there were four of) looked like it had rage in them. The thing didn’t see us right away. We were frozen in our spots. We didn’t know if we should’ve played died or run like the wind in the other direction. The beast turned around and looked at us three in the eyes. So we all turned to each other at the same time, and took off in the way we came. We didn’t talk during this the only sounds I could hear were the loud roars from the lion and screams from Macy! I dropped my Ipad therefore there was no light, and we were running in the dark again the beast could be right behind us or still sitting there. I could only think about myself at this point, I had no clue where anyone else was. I was the first to make it out of the cave. I sat there waiting for the other too, when I heard footsteps come running out! Macy came running out with tears and blood on her

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