Personal Narrative: The Never Ending Rollercoaster

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The Never Ending Rollercoaster
As my friends and I pass by store to store we had realized that there was a bright red flyers. It had caught our eye, we went and grabbed a flyer and it had said “Ladies and Gentlemen there is going to be a new rollercoaster opening up this Saturday! Come and join the ride!” My friends had said that they wanted to go and check out the rollercoaster. We all had agreed to go this Saturday and ride the rollercoaster. The next day was already Saturday. I of course always had been scared of rollercoasters. They were never my thing, I always feel like butterflies in my stomach and my hands get shaky and sweaty. As my friends knocked on the door and walked into my house. They said “Hey girl are you ready.” Yeah I am
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I keep telling my friends “is this part of the ride?” Then the lights started flashing on and off. They keep laughing and laughing and then the rollercoaster started to shake. Then we hear a voice from the manager of the rollercoaster saying “ Something is wrong with the rollercoaster, please be patient.” While my friends think its a joke. I was like am I the only one who is freaking out! While the lights kept flashing a moment later it had stopped. Yet I was relieved that the lights had stopped flashing. Then all of a sudden it's pitch black and then we hear a scream. Then the lights went back on and me and my friends see that one of our friends were missing. Then there was only four of us left in the ride. Yet again the lights went off and heard a scream. When the lights went back on there was only three of us. Then again we couldn’t see anything and then lights went back on. There was only two girls and it was me and my best friend. Then she was gone and I was the only one left. I started crying and saying “Please! Don’t take

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