Personal Narrative: The Fire

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The fire!!!!!

When i was getting off the bus my mom was picking me and my sister we got into my mom’s car she was on her phone. When she usually isn’t but then she showed us a picture and there was a fire 80 feet away from our house.

I was shocked my heart was beating i thought was i cursed or i don’t know. My mom said
‘’it will be fine the firefighters should take care of it’’. That just made my sister cry even more for some reason that made me feel way better what my mom said. Lets introduce me i am Zach i am not active like a statue sitting on a computer that;s me and i am short like small water bottle but not that short. I am little bit overweight, I am shaped like a bottle over the head but at the side i am aflat surface on the side’s if you know what i mean.Well now i will introduce my sister Victoria. She is very smart she got ohneral or however you spell it she is very bossy like if you watched SpongebobSquarePants, she is like Squidward but WORSE. So she wears jeans all the time and loves shopping i hate shopping i rather be stuck at home alone for 5 hours which i have. Well that’s
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She also says
‘’if that was a person i will handle that person myself’’.
Which she can’t because if she Coulden’t take me down she can’t take a grownup man down. Well now we are making some food i am making cheese wheels she is eating doritoes and watching the news trying to find the fire and also mom said
‘’ i will bring the dogs over if the fire gets close’’. I told mom to tell us what is happening in text. Now victoria is getting mad at the news station saying ‘’ who cares if a hospital is in a real lock down’’. Then i said to myself ‘’well it’s best interest is to hide don’t you think’’ then i answered Victoria with your best answer in the world.
‘’ That is important news victoria’’ Then she said
’’ i don’t care’’. I am like ok

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