Personal Narrative: The Dance That Changed My Life

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I’ve always enjoyed the rush of performing. The stare of thousands of eyes on you, the music ringing loudly in your ears. Sometimes, though, it’s too much. My whole life is a performance, always pushing me to be perfect in the suddenity of the moment. Don’t be fooled however, it’s a horrible show I always put on.
When I was three years old, I was bouncing off the walls, digging in pots, being the problematic child. The only things that calmed me were singing and generally being worn out. That being said, when my mother took me to see a show at our local civic center, it changed my life. The recital, being put on by a traveling group of dancers called the Trinity dancers, had me out of my seat, staring at them on my tiptoes. They were prancing in circles, arms down and up, always smiling. It intrigued me, and I quickly asked my mother what they were doing, disturbing the people around us. “Shh.. They are
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Shh, that isn’t the real reason. I was actually so embarrassed by something I did at school that I was scared of bullying the next year. That caused me to leave school two weeks into fourth grade. Don’t tell my mother. We first went to Nova, a school in which I had to work at home and then come in once a week for a check-up. That didn’t work out, so for 5th grade, I joined an online learning system called K-12. It wasn’t the best and I really hated it. In 6th grade, I joined Laurel Springs Online Academy. However, for the second half of 6th grade and the first half of 7th, I joined my local middle school. I had become extremely lonely at home by myself and I was hoping that could be solved. Luckily, I was right. This middle school was full of people I had known from before 4th grade and bullying was very sparse. It was a lovely experience. If I hadn’t moved, I would still be there, happily learning the mandated information with my two best

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