Personal Narrative-The Cabin

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The cabin
One early morning I my mom and brother Were going to the woods of California The road was bumpy and shaky and i fell and i fell asleep, we finally got there and we met our friends, i met my friend jack and harry we had a good day till nightfall came. When nightfall came we snuck out to go hiking and see anything cool out in the woods, we then went out to a path we didn't take during the day. my friend took out his phone to pull up a map by now when we did this camping trip when were ten years old and we had a group of three. the tree’s looked like they were pitch black. We were walking and we found sticks and branches everywhere it was a little chilly outside to the point you had a few goosebumps. We gladly had
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I jumped up and said wake up we gotta go making my friend's confused my friend Harry said what? We all got up and I said I heard a loud bang and they were confused and I said let's go back we saw a light and said huh I guess. we didn't go that far we wandered towards the light and we found a cabin of some sort. we saw a light with what looked like a man and a dog we knocked asking for directions, forgetting about our phone they were dead anyway.We pushed the door open yelling hello, we walked in and looked around, we saw destroyed furniture and a dirty kitchen with spider webs and dust everywhere we were startled to hear another bang upstairs just like the one I heard when we dozed off. I thought we should leave, but we didn't instead, since we had a group of people we thought we were tough enough to go upstairs and confront the thing or person making the loud bangs. We all went upstairs and opened the door across the door we heard loud bangs, we heard the loud bangs there were dirty clothes there was a rusty drawers and a broken window with glass on the floor so sharp it looked like it could penetrate metal. We finally thought it was time to go into the room that had the bangs the floor was creaky and the cabin smelled like the wet dog we finally got to the room and we all pushed the

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