Personal Narrative-The Cabin Inside Six Flags

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The Cabin Inside Six Flags
"Kalie. Kalie. Kalie." I said, hitting the pillow on my best friends head. She rolled over and looked at me with a hateful expression. Her blue eyes were clouded with tiredness. "What?" She asked hoarsely, her voice cracking at the end. "Let's go. You promised we were going to go down to six flags tonight." I said, pulling her cold hand out of the bed. "Okay, okay. Let me get changed first." Kalie said groggily walking to the bathroom.
After waiting for half an hour, Kalie came out of the bathroom with a smile on her face. We got into her Crimson colored Honda and drove off to Six flags.

Driving through the dark streets of New Orleans, I gave Kalie directions on how to get to Six Flags. The amusement park got destroyed
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I could feel a lump forming in my throat. I gulped as I shined the flashlight in front of my feet. I passed a bunch of scary looking buildings, but I started to think to myself, their just carnival rides. I almost peed my pants when the sound of Kalie voice came on the walkie talkie. "Please, don't hurt me." I heard Kalie say. I could imagine her standing in a corner, shaking. I heard another voice, like a mans, on the other end, but I couldn't make out what he said. I tried listening more, but she hung up the walkie talkie. From the other side of the park, I heard and ear splitting scream. I stopped in my tracks and contemplated my choices. I could either run to the scream, look for Kalie, continue to the cabin, or go …show more content…
I turned around, slowly, to see a clown statue, smiling an evil smile. It started to walk towards me, slowly, but just as scary. Inside I was running, but on the outside, I was frozen. My heartbeat started to rise, and I started to sweat. I turned in the opposite direction and started to run. I ran, and ran, with no idea where to go. I ran past fun houses and roller coasters, all the way to the games. I stopped in front of the ring toss, catching my breath.

I began walking at a slow pace, to see if Kalie was anywhere. I shined the flashlight on every booth, until I stopped dead in my tracks. I began to feel tears forming at the brim of my eyes. There, in the middle of the path, was a lifeless Kalie, with blood all around her body. "Help me." Kalie said weakly. I ran over to her and crouched down at her side. "Kalie, Kalie, stay with me." I said smacking her face. She closed her eyes and I put her head down. At this point I couldn't stop crying, that is until I hear

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