Personal Narrative Techniques Used In American Football

Improved Essays
One Scrimmage “Allison, you’re on deck,” he says as he’s waving at me to get my helmet on. We were scrimmaging the older team that night as a warm up before we went to Bend that weekend. Putting my helmet on, all sweaty and nasty due to the conditioning we did in the practice beforehand. Sliding my slippery, sweaty hitting gloves on and running on deck. Ema was up, she swings. Strike three you’re out! “Go Allison, you’re up!” my coach says. I run to the plate, only anticipating the best strike about to come. The pitcher started her motion, and as she swung around, I was loaded and ready. The ball flies across the plate as if it were lightning. “Strike”
Here it comes, I can feel it. The next pitch will be the one. I’m aching to get a hit. As the pitcher lets the ball go, I hear this silence. The silence you hear before any big moment. When the ball travels through the plate, I swing. Harder, harder than I ever have before. The ball glides across the air as if something just fell from the sky. I let go of the bat, and dash to the first base, second, and my coach is still waving for me to come more. I run even harder to third base, as if I were the lightning. I see the ball is thrown, and as I begin to dive, I feel something. A pain that is worse than I have ever felt before. Something just came over me. I finish my dive, and as I do, I screech in excruciating
…show more content…
I lay in the grass nearby, crying. As I calm down, I hobble to the car, ready to leave.
*********
Two weeks had passed, I had felt the same. No better, no worse. As I limp into the doctor's office, I can only think about what is to come. Cast? Surgery? Nothing but just stay off of it for a few weeks?
“We got the MRI results back, you’re going to need knee surgery,” the doctor informs. Devastated, I go home wondering why this had to happen to me? Couldn’t have been someone else and not me? Why do I have to do this? Have could one day have changed my life

Related Documents

  • Decent Essays

    Oh baseball, Oh baseball Bring runs to surprise me Oh baseball, Oh baseball Please no injuries Each hit sends the ball to high flight Each fan’s face sparkles with delight Oh baseball, Oh baseball Either caught or hit out Oh baseball, Oh baseball Tradition never ceasing One strike, Two strikes…

    • 129 Words
    • 1 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Decent Essays

    As soon as I take a step out on the field, I forget everything outside of baseball. Before every game, I warm up by taking ground balls. As simple and meaningless as this sounds, it is one of my favorite things to do. Every single ground ball I field, I field with passion. Each one means something.…

    • 375 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Great Essays

    Rhetorical Home-run It’s down to the ninth inning, and Bird is last to bat. Despite her weary looks, you can tell her head is in the game. She had worked hard this season to make this final game worth the time and effort. She had long waited for this moment, and she knows she’s ready to give her all.…

    • 1503 Words
    • 7 Pages
    Great Essays
  • Superior Essays

    As I was rounding first I felt my feet sleep out from underneath me, I had fallen flat on my butt. Embarrassment on my face I got up quickly and ran back to first base. Although I was embarrassed I knew I still had to run the bases. A hard ground ball had been hit passed the infield and had moved me over to second base. I was stuck on second at the end of the inning, nobody moved me around.…

    • 1214 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Superior Essays
  • Improved Essays

    I could already see both men getting into their stances. The batter rising, back straightening, almost cutting through me with his eyes as he waited for the ball. The catcher sinking down, ready to catch the ball as it would pass my opponent. I almost threw out my shoulder as I extended my arm, releasing the ball with the motion. “Strike one,” a voice rang through the air.…

    • 325 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    One of the biggest fears as a pitcher in the game of baseball, is to throw a pitch that will lead to one of the most electrifying or disappointing sensations throughout a…

    • 1006 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Decent Essays

    It's the bottom of the 9th and Joe's team is down by 3. Joe's coach calls everybody into the dugout and inspirationally explains, ”We have been down by much more before. I believe in every single one of you.…

    • 441 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Softball Satire

    • 790 Words
    • 4 Pages

    There's nothing more satisfying than hearing the sound of a strong hit. With the contact of the ball to the bat, all your anger…

    • 790 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The game begins, first pitch “strike one” yells the umpire. The crowed starts cheering and my energy level starts to rise higher, I can feel the energy start to take over my legs. The crowd keeps cheering, I jump out of my seat and run over to the dugout to speak the coach. Coach “number 8 is the girl that hits deep to right field but, swings at high pitches”. The coach sends the signal to the pitcher “Strike two” yells the umpire.…

    • 594 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Decent Essays

    It was a sunny day in Marlton. We just got to school and now have to go to our first period classes. My class was gym. After getting changed in the locker room, we went into the gym for warm ups. We did our usual stretches and exercises for a few minutes.…

    • 203 Words
    • 1 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Improved Essays

    When I'm up to bat I don't hear a thing, I hit the ball and all I hear is everyone chanting and screaming. The very first time I played softball, it was my very first game, I hit the softball to the fence and I stood there in shock, I didn't know what to do. The coach was screaming "RUN" and I ran the bases, the other team kept over throwing the ball to the bases to get me out. I made it to home plate, it was a home run.…

    • 909 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    I step up to the plate-palms sweating, heart racing. Two strikes go and now I know I have to hit the next one. The pitcher winds up and “crack!” I’m off to the races.…

    • 529 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    College Essay On Softball

    • 570 Words
    • 3 Pages

    Pow! First hit of the game and I am sprinting hard to each base “get down! get down! get down!” my coach screams as I am running to third base.…

    • 570 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    My first baseball game ever had been off to a tremendous start; until my next at bat. After my first at bat, I was riding my high horse thinking I was going to get another hit and make my dad proud all over again. I stepped into the white caulk batter’s box, and went through it all again. As the pitch came in, I noticed it seemed to be coming towards me instead of down the middle. I wasn’t sure what to do, so I stayed right where I was; and got…

    • 918 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Decent Essays

    The Importance Of Calumet

    • 518 Words
    • 3 Pages

    I’m feeling great - It’s 65 degrees and the sun is beaming down on our skin - I’m in my senior year baseball season and we’re hosting the classic Negaunee Baseball Invitational tournament - Being a senior I’ve never won a tournament for baseball - Now we’re in the championship game against the Calumet Copper Kings - I could not be more confident going into a game than I am right now - We’re throwing our horse and he’s pretty damn good at what he does - The first pitch gets tossed and my initial thoughts are that Calumet looks tired and lazy - I wanted to jump all over them as Calumet is one of my most hated schools in the UP - I walk up to the plate with a runner on first base - I scan Calumets strategy about how they’re gonna adjust to me…

    • 518 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Decent Essays