Personal Narrative-Sarah's Amazing Realization

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Sarah’s Amazing Realization Deep into the murky woods, dwelled animals of all kinds. Animals big and small lived together in the massive woodland. One animal named Sarah, a slimy, slow, mucky snail, lived in a petite log in the middle of the woods. Lonely and friendless, Sarah existed exclusively in silent solitude. Sarah’s reluctance to socialize made her more reclusive. but she undertakes the challenge, at times, to interact with other animals in the neighborhood. One day Sarah slid down the woods when she saw Jill amusing herself in the humongous oak tree. The sun dipped below the horizon as she strolled over to Jill the rabbit “can i join the fun” Sarah uttered. “ Ofcourse not, you’re a snail and you can’t do anything I can” Jill cackled …show more content…
Her throat felt like one big lump, and her eyeballs had started sweating. Her vision, blurry, and unclear. As soon as her eyes drifted away from the road, she banged into a colossal rock lying in the middle of the tiny trail. She kept on moving, Sarah didn’t want to be caught by Jill again. Eventually, after a long, painful trip home, she arrived at her house, weird noises started coming up her throat and out of her mouth, she started bawling. the sound seemed so loud it could have been heard all the way to the end of the forest. She buried her face into the pillow to try to muffle the sounds, and wipe away her …show more content…
She wasn’t ugly at all, the things people say about her is never true she thought. She wasn’t dumb, she could dance, she could climb, and everything everyone said about her is wrong, she thought. Sarah had slowly started to stand up, and her face brightened, like a sun in the sky, every time she comforted herself. “ I’m amazing” Sarah jubilated.
Without a doubt Sarah walked to the door and opened it with an enormous smile on her face, her eyes met Jill’s, “ You… Are…..Wrong” she exclaimed still keeping a smile on her face, her smile went from one side of her face to the next. Jill stood there confused, a bitter frown appeared on her face. Her pointy rabbit ears had started to become droopy. She closed the door and walked around Jill who stood there frozen. She skipped off the porch. The trees had been whistling at her all the way down the road, and the sun was

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