Personal Narrative-Sacrifice

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On the twenty-first of February, Melanie met a guy named Milton. Milton was a senior college student working on his way into the world of technology. They met in front of a bar as she was walking over to her friend's house. He saw her walking then stoped her with a smile.

"Hello, I'm Milton. Are you coming to the bar?" He asked looking as quirky as ever.

Melanie laughed. Then Milton realized how dumb he sounded. "Im not old enough to go in there." Melanie Informed.

"Really?" Milton dug his hang into his pockets. "Mind if I ask how old?"

"Seventeen."

"Ah. well, good. Um, can I, I mean, may I have your number?"

Melanie looked at him. studying him up and down to see if he might be serious. "Yeah. sure" Melanie replied getting a pen out of her small backpack.
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Milton then got quiet.

"Shut up and give me ur arm."

Melanie wrote down her cell number on Milton's arm, and then carried on to her friend's home. Mrs. Wallaces homework was at stake.

Once Melanie got to Natalie's house she spilled everything. Told her about the way Milton stopped her on the sidewalk. How his body language appealed to her liking. He was odd, but definitly in a good way.

"So when do you think he is going to call you?" Natalie queried.

"I am not sure but, hopefully later on tonig-" Melanie was interrupted by her phone buzzing. She look at her phone and saw and unknown number, then answered it. "H-hello?" She stuttered.

"Hi it's Milton. I was thinking about u."

Melanie's eye opened wide. then she said, "Already? Barely been an hour since we met on the street."

Natalie chimed in with, "what is he saying?"

Melanie had then gave her "The look" then turned away as Milton began speaking more. "Who was that?" He said chuckling.

"Don't worry about it. Can you maybe let me call u back when I get home maybe." Melanie

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