Personal Narrative-Sacrifice Or Murder?

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When I pushed open the bathroom door I couldn't move. There lying on the floor was my son's blue blanket and his pajamas, but no baby. AH, i screamed. My husband, will came running into the room, what's wrong mary. Our baby boy is dead I said. Will quickly pulled out his phone and had 911 on speed dial in a snap. Hello, the operator said. What's your emergency? My baby boy is has been kidnapped. Ok, what's your address? 194 Oak Hill. Ok, the cops will be on their way, stay calm. Then the line went dead. He was our only child what are we gonna do? I asked. Well, find him don't worry. Then there was a knock on the door but it wasn't a cop, it was a ransom note with no person. I'll read it I said. We have your baby however he is very cold. I hope you …show more content…
Mary, you're gonna have to leave now. Once i got escorted to my car, for safety reasons, I drove away in pain. My husband can't be the murderer, I'm gonna find out who did this, and make them pay, i thought. When i got to my house, I unlocked the door and ran to my room. I'm not gonna waste another second, I said out loud. I opened my laptop and searched up my vacation camp. I clicked on the website i made, and checked out the security cameras. The only reason i made them was because someone robbed us and took our boat. The cops weren't able to track the robber so i set up security cameras. I typed in my password and clicked back 24 hours. For the first 10 minutes i saw nothing, but then there it was, someone placing security cameras. However his face was masked and i couldn't see her hair. That's when i noticed something. They dropped a really important something, and that's gonna help me a lot. I went to my car and got in. It's about a 30 minute drive to my destination so i didn't have to worry. Once i got there a cold breeze was sent down my spine. I went to the lake on my property were i saw the person on the video. Aha, i said picking it

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