Personal Narrative Rubric Essay

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Personal Narrative Rubric
Standards
Above
Meeting
Approaching
Below
Content
The Narrative has…
The Narrative has...
The Narrative has...
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Topic
Engaging description of the challenge/ choice
Clear & detailed explanation of the consequences
Insightful reflection examining consequences of choice & life lesson

Describes a challenge/choice
Explains the consequences
Reflects on the lesson learned and the consequences of the choice

Identifies challenge/choice, but lacks details
Mentions the consequences w/ limited or no details
Minimal reflection on lesson learned

Doesn’t describe challenge/choice

Doesn’t explain consequences

Doesn’t reflect on lesson learned

Elaboration
Thoroughly used well-chosen & specific details throughout
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The Narrative has...
The Narrative has..

Few or no errors.

Incorporates a variety of punctuation styles used throughout the piece.

Few or no basic errors

Demonstrated mastery of commas, quotations dashes, parentheses.

Frequent errors in verb tense, subject/verb agreement, pronouns, sentences fragments / run-ons, misused / misspelled words.
Not yet demonstrating mastery of commas, dashes, parentheses.

Frequent errors in basic spelling, end punctuation, capitalization and apostrophe.
Content - First & Last Name
Organization - Date
Style - Core I / II / III
Conventions - Hansen

Title

2012 July 4th my sister was having trouble with her boy friend and he wanted to see his girls my nieces they weren't supposed to meat but they did anyway so my sister got out of the car and left the kids in there so they could talk they weren't tall enough to see out the window he had one of the kids blanket behind his back and rolled up was a knife my sister got st-abed four times Jaslene and Naya could only hear Emily screaming and he ran off to the river there were two college girls at the gas station and a firefighter they all ran over to help and applied pressure one one of the college girls was terrified of blood so she drove the kids away to a more safe enviorment it took almost an hour for the ambulance to get there then my sister was flown to haver view and was there for about 3 months and then she was able to come back and me and my broth took care of her and her dauters but now she's perfectly heathy and back with her

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