Personal Narrative: Red Drink

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One day I was walking home from track practice,and one house I walked by was two men and a seventeen year old boy.

They were sipping on some on some red drink;then suddenly the one in the middle said come here.I said I don’t know him.When I looked behind myself to see how far my house was;then i was out like a light.After I ran for about four blocks,suddenly I noticed i was falling.The trashcan pushed my leg which torn my acl and broke my tibia.After they caught up to me,they started kicking and punching until the cops drove by.The two men and the high school boy fled the feds circle in the three then they got wrestled down to the ground.They asked how it happen i told them then one of the cops noticed something red on my leg from my knee

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