Personal Narrative: Pressures On A Football Team

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All the bases were loaded, two outs, two strikes, and we were losing 5-9. I was up to bat, extremely scared, and very pressured. My coach was yelling at me and telling me all these things to do and they were making my mind crazy. I was scared I would strike out and my whole team would be mad, I was scared my dad would be angry, and I was afraid that I would let myself down. I didn’t believe in myself that I could hit the ball, but it all began when I stepped up to the plate…

“Come on Gwen, keep your foot in,” said Coach Kress. My team was warming up and I was doing warm-up swings with Coach Kress. As I was batting Coach Kress was telling me things I needed to improve on and my head was
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See the ball of the way in,” Coach Kress yelled. I stepped back in the box and the pitch came in—clink! Foul tip, strike 2! I backed out of the box and I was very nervous! In my head i was saying to myself, you can do it Gwen, just keep your eye on the …show more content…
I hit it! When I hit the ball, I felt my bat shake and I felt a solid hit. I dug my cleats into the ground, I threw my bat on the ground, and looked for first base. When I saw it go over the right fielder's head, I smiled and ran with all my might. My coach at first base was waving me on and I bit my lip and I hit it very far into the gap of right field and sprinted to first base! When I rounded 1 Gabby went into home, I rounded 2 and Ariana went home, and I rounded 3—SMASH! I ran right into Coach Kress on the 3rd base line. I knocked him down like a crane knocking over a building! I felt my helmet hit right into his shoulder and my ankle twisted. Zoning out I hear Coach Kress yell RUN! I got up, looked for the ball, and then sprinted home! I ran and slide straight into home base. I got safe at home, which was my first grand slam! My whole team came out of the dough-out and cheered for me, high-fiving me, and saying nice job. I felt so good and couldn’t stop smiling. My mom came up to me and congratulated me and hugged my very

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