Plan the course of events in your narrative.
First, Proserpina is running down the strip of sand by the seashore and she trips, but a nymph catches her. Then, she thanks the nymph by picking her flowers in the woods where her mother told her not to go. Pluto rises from the hole in the volcano and speaks to Proserpina persuasively. He kidnaps her and takes her to the underworld. Next, they get into the palace and he offers her a delicious fruit called a Pomegranate. She takes the fruit and eats it and she is stuck in the underworld for 6 months out of the year because she just ate the fruit of hell. Enraged, her mother, Ceres, proposes an exchange. Her daughter for two out of the four seasons and he keeps her for the other two seasons. This
First, Proserpina is running down the strip of sand by the seashore and she trips, but a nymph catches her. Then, she thanks the nymph by picking her flowers in the woods where her mother told her not to go. Pluto rises from the hole in the volcano and speaks to Proserpina persuasively. He kidnaps her and takes her to the underworld. Next, they get into the palace and he offers her a delicious fruit called a Pomegranate. She takes the fruit and eats it and she is stuck in the underworld for 6 months out of the year because she just ate the fruit of hell. Enraged, her mother, Ceres, proposes an exchange. Her daughter for two out of the four seasons and he keeps her for the other two seasons. This