Personal Narrative On My Death

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This is a very well written story, made upon my death. I'm Sam, 14 years old. At 14 I had the most awkward phase, the most embarrassing. I wanted to be in control, to be weird but it be worshiped. And since I wanted that now I’m dead. And if you're reading this it's can only mean two things. You're alive and this is me writing in the afterlife. Don’t think, Don’t think, Don’t think……. Ewe what is that smell?

“ Okay, forget this I can’t do it!” said Mike.
Mike was my best friend since first grade. We’ve grown up together ever since. Our parents eventually became good friends, I know weird right. “ Same. I gave up five minutes ago, I was basically sleeping for the last 10.” Did you ever hear that humans only have 10% control of their brain? I know right, a bunch of bull?! When I heard this I couldn’t believe it. And then Mike and I did some more search and found out that some people have found ways to unlock more brain power. Man oh man, that really got me thinking. And one of the easy ways to do it was meditation, well at least we thought easy.

“ Well, what now? That was absolutely hard and unbearable. How do people sit there in silence and not think.” said I. “I keep thinking about not thinking” Mike said.

“ Dear God, I know I’ve done really bad things, but I hope you can forgive me
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I could tell something was wrong, her voice and tone sounded like there was some sad and hurt. “ Son. Your mother and I have to tell you something” After my father said that their was a jurassic pause. I couldn’t think of what was going on, my mind was so blank and I was so cold. “ Mike and his parents were killed, a tree landed on their house.” Now I felt really cold, the inside and outside of me.” I know this must be really hard for you, trust me it's hard on us too sweetie. But Mike’s spirit will always be with you.” How could this have happened I just felt there, you would think I would have heard a prodigious

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