Personal Narrative: My Swimming Story

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My Swimming Story Swimming never fails to appeal to me. I grew up swimming and had continuous year-round swim workouts and competitions. Being born and raised in China, I started my swim career in an elementary school. Since then, I swam through elementary school, middle school, high school, and college. It could not be denied that my hard work paid off since I managed to obtain lots of medals and broke multiple local records. What’s more valuable was that I became the team captain in my high school swim team. I immigrated to America along with my family in 2012 and never ceased to continue my swim career. In the beginning, I had language barriers and therefore failed to follow the coach's instruction. There was no denying that I was extremely

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