Personal Narrative: My Interest In Golf

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My critic has always been my mom. She had helped me by restricting my leisure time on a routine basis and setting a time limit on my studies which made me develop a habit of completing my schoolwork in a timely manner. One of my most valued aspirations is to become a professional golfer in the PGA. I was always interested in a variety of sports, but especially golf and basketball. However, as I got older, my interest in golf started to grow. My mentor or critic who guided and helped me accomplish one of my goals was my swing coach, Coach Bong. Most of the time, he is more of a mentor, but there were times where he was also a critic. For example, I used to have a slicing problem with my driver, and the only way to help me get rid of this problem

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