Personal Narrative-My Hero's Death

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“What? Where am I, the last thing i remembered was… was… being stabbed by a random person? Who in the hell goes around randomly stabbing people! Well at least he did it quick and precise. I wouldn’t want to remember bleeding out and trying to pull my intestines back inside of me. Wait, am I even dead? How am I even conscious right now? Isn’t being dead supposed to be… I don’t know dead. No thoughts, no nothing, just plain dead. Weird?”

As the figure was self contemplating, He suddenly realized that he couldn’t see. Scratch that, none of his senses are even working right now. Let alone actually “seeing” where he was at, he couldn’t even hear where he was at. “I guess this is the part where I’m supposed to wait for some “Higher” being to show itself” It’s amazing how this figure’s thought process is working at this moment. You would think that for someone who was just stabbed and killed would be so calm.

“You’re the one that’s weird boy! I was waiting for beings such as your kind to rage for what happened unto one’s self. Apparently I was mistaken” an Ancient voice echoed across this “void”. “Woaaa, so
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Would you...”

“May I ask what this proposition is?” interrupted Jake.

“Patients is a virtue young one. I was just getting to that” GAWD said bemusedly. “Ahem… Would you like to be just like an OP character from all those novels and shows you’ve seen?”

At this exact moment when GAWD proposed his offer, Jake almost had a mental break down due to the magnificence of GAWD’s offer. Slowly calming himself down, Jake couldn’t help but tremble from time to time. Deeply inhaling, Jake said,”FUCK YEA!!!!” accidentally, Jake’s voice was louder than he thought it to be. He couldn’t help it. I mean what would you do if you were in his shoes huh? Reply back like an JP character with a ‘yes’ (O.o)? No right?

“I like your enthusiasm Jake. Haha finally something to relieve this boredom!” GAWD

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