Personal Narrative: My Heroic Journey

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June 16, 2014 Thunk, thunk, thunk, the greenish-blueish water slammed against are boat as a storm rolled in. Me and my best friend Will were about to go scuba diving. The engine's roar died and me and Will got perched on the side of the boat "you ready Seth?" Will questioned "As ready as i'll ever be" I explained "3,2,1, go!" the driver announced me and Will back falled off the water was murky and cold, I almost laughed at how I sounded like darth vader whenever I breathed. A small fish swam by my face as Will pointed down and we both dove to the bottom where we found a 150 foot rock that looked like moldy cheese, will was freaking out then I noticed what got him excited, it wasnt moldy cheese, it was a boat. …show more content…
"3,2,1 Go! the driver yelled and with that me and will back falled off to find that the water was quite warm today. We swam to the bottom and continued swimming left until we found the other half of the boat embedded in the sand we found a large hole in the side of the boat that was reletively the size of our boat, and we swam into it to find another dark passage way. Until we found the captains room, which had a large wooden steering wheel that was now covered in algea me and will grabbed the steering wheel and yanked it out of the ground for proof that we found the bradley. We were running low on oxygen, so we swam to the surface, where the driver gave us a strange look as we hauled the wheel onto our boat. "Im guessing you found something good today"before I could say anything will blurted "yeah we found the bradley" the driver anaylized the wheel until what seemed like forever he said "yep this is the Bradleys wheel... which you just ripped off the

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