Personal Narrative: My First Proof Of Evidence

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I arrived at camp half blood weak and scared and do not no where I am at.I was going on a trip and we had a car wreck and I walked to this born.It was camp half blood and they took me in and seid I was a god.I am the son of ares because I am fearless never lost a fight and I am the god of war.

My 1st proof of evidence is that Ares is my father is that I like to fight like my father.Ares likes watching his family fight.There’s nothing like watching your relative fight,I always say. It means Ares likes seeing his family fighting other greek gods.All of his family likes to fight just like him.

My second proof of evidence that Ares is my father is that I am fearless just like my father. You’re pretty smug,lord Ares,for a guy who runs from cupid

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