Personal Narrative: My Dad

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Crack! Boom! Pow! Went the thunder I was so scared I started shaking. My family and I were on a iceberg suddenly the iceberg broke I was drifting away from my family I tried to swim, but the waves were to big. I drifted far away and I couldn’t see anything but fog so I went to sleep and decided to find a way home tomorrow.
When I woke up I saw a boy and a girl staring at me “are they going to hurt me”? I thought I looked around and found out that I was on a small Beach and in the distance I saw a bright cabin. Went I looked back the boy ran away and he came back with his mom and dad.
The boy's dad helped me untangle the net off my flipper. After that the dad gently pushed me into the water but I didn’t know so I swam up to shore. Because

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