Personal Narrative: My Brother's Jeopardy

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I sat lounging on a couch becoming bored of Jeopardy. My feet swung and my head laid uncomfortably on the back of the couch.

I was nine years old when I died.

My parents were away working and my brother was staying at a friends house. I was fine by myself and didn’t really care what was going on.

The time was 9:47, way past my bed time, but I knew that my parents wouldn’t come home til 11:00.

Clicking off the TV I silently listened to the buzzing of it as it slowly lost power.

A creak sounded…

I looked around thinking it was my brother.

“Ben?” I called innocently. “Ben, is that you?”

Slow heavy footsteps approached from the darkness of the kitchen.

“Ben?”

Squinting now I focused on a moving object in front of me.

A leather hand covered

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