Personal Narrative-Mall Havoc

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Mall Havoc
“Finally!” I exclaimed as we pulled up in the parking space.
We had been looking for one for hours. Lots of people come to the mall on weekends, My mom, grandma, sister and I all got out of the car and stretched. One door slamming after the other. The we headed inside. My sister and I were jumping up and down and blabbering about all of our favorite stores we were planning on going to. “Before you guys get too excited,” my mom said interrupting our blabbering “your grandma and I are going to go to our stores first. And then we can go wherever you want.” We all agreed and carried on. After a while, we were in Macey’s trying to find my grandma a new dress.
“This one is perfect.” she said holding the dress up. “What do you guys think?
“I mean, if it’s what you want.” I said looking down the whole time.
“I’m going to go look in this store over here.” my mom said changing the subject. Now it was just us three. My grandma went up to the counter to check out her “perfect” dress.
“Uh oh,” she said. “your mom has my wallet. I’m going to go get it. You girls stay here.”
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But then, five minutes had passed. And then ten. And then fifteen. And then twenty. Oh boy. We both stood there quietly the whole time. “I’m going with mom and grandma.” my sister said killing the silence. She walked right out. I didn’t even try to stop her. Which is what i should’ve done. Now I was alone. And I was scared. Gosh. I thought. What’s taking them so long? I decided to leave Macey’s and join the others. But when I reached the store and looked inside, none of them were in there, I could’ve sworn this was the store she said she was going to. I did the only thing that popped up in my head at the time. I searched the WHOLE

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