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Personal Narrative: If I Had To Rate Myself

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If I had to rate myself it would have to be at least a two and a half. I thought that I did pretty well with the organization and presentations of my writing. With Ideas and sentence fluency I could have done much better. Those two sections with my writing were the weakest in this essay. I think if I thought about a better way to make my transitions into paragraphs my grade would have improved.

When I revise my the papers I write i try to provide a ton of thought. I start with reading the essay over again and try my best to figure out what I could do better. The things I revise the most would be my word choice and try to use more imagerie. I also go to my friends or other people for their input in my writing to see what they have to say

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