Personal Narrative-I Spot A Cabin

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Looking around for food for the others in the pack, I spot a cabin out in the open. Howling for the hours others to come meet up with me and go to see if there's anything in that cabin we can eat. After howling for a while the others come looking all starved and weak

“So what did you make us come out for,” said quietly by Matt
“Well there's a cabin down there that we can check out to see if there’s anything there to eat”.
“Okay then let's go check it out then” said by Luke

Moving along the prairie with Luke, Matt, aiden,Kaiden and me. Coming up to the house from the north Aiden points out that he saw a head through the window. Thinking in my head there might be some humans in there, that would be better than nothing to eat. Looking around at the cabin I spot the to door to the place. scratching at the door, we hear a loud
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Walking up behind him watching him trying to wiggle through the window 2 big loud sounds from the cabin Kaiden drop onto the floor bleeding. The other attacking the door harder and faster aiden jumps at the window and 2 more loud sound come from the inside and his body drop right on top of Kaidens.through angry luke ran up to the window, Yelling at him to stop he jumps up then and falls down dead on top of the others.

Matt and I are the only ones left wondering what we're going to do.
“Should we keep on attacking it said” matt

“No we shouldn’t we should just go.”
Walking form a cabin we see an a lot of blood going back into the wood in some bushes. Walking around the bush, Matt on the other side i'm on the other side, we see a dead deer that was wounded.
“I guess we have something to eat,” said by Matt with a small smile on his

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