Personal Narrative: How One Girl Changed My Life

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How One Girl Changed My Life Has there ever been a moment in your life where you have spent time with someone special to you and you feel really happy and excited when you’re in their presence? I know I have because this one sweet girl that was very different from all the other girls that I’ve ever met, asked me to Winter Formal. We spent time a lot of time together, which made me feel more and more excited to be with her to where I was constantly in a good mood all the time and was very crazy about this girl. On Winter Formal night, I asked her to be my girlfriend before my friend and I left her after party around 12:40 a.m. in the St. Thomas Moore parking lot across the street from her house. I listened to my heart and I just knew I wasn’t going to leave her house that night without asking her the most important thing that I’ve been waiting to do for about 2 months. I couldn’t wait much longer to be officially together after going on fun, special dates for almost 2 months and spending a lot of time with her before we . This one incredible girl has changed my …show more content…
We all had so much fun at the after party when watching the movie and eating popcorn. The movie ended and most of the group leaves to go home. Me, Brooks, Lauren and Nicole are left in their living room, eating and talking to one another. At around 12:35, we all walk outside to my truck. Brooks and Nicole are saying good bye but I couldn’t say bye because I didn’t want to leave. I was also nervous and very excited, my heart was pounding and on that cold and quiet night I thought I could hear it beating. I tell Nicole bye and then she and Brooks walk around the other side of the truck and hug and say goodbye. The moment was perfect; I had to ask her right now! When I hugged her and thanked her for everything, I asked her, “Oh yeah! Almost forgot, will you be my

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