Personal Narrative: Hersheypark

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HersheyPark is filled with acres and acres of space. Which causes some people to get lost in different places. In this case, I got lost near the restrooms.
While enjoying myself at this amusement park everything came apart in a blink of an eye. How? Well, my dad (Francisco Lopez), mom (Abigail Lopez), and I were walking peacefully throughout the park, when my mom asked my dad and I if we needed to use the bathroom. We agreed . Since I knew I was going to be in the bathroom for a good amount, I decided to pull out my mp3 and headphones to listen to some music. Once I had finished and made my way to the exit I started looking for my mom, but, there was no signs of her. As the seconds went by, I had started to panic more and more thinking of where she could be.
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Coincidently, the dolphin show wasn’t that far from the bathroom. So, I went there in hopes of finding my mom. We can say that moments later my dad had finished using the bathroom and to his surprise couldn’t find my mom; For the reason that my mom had made her ways to different locations to find me, as she recalled calling my name, as to why I was taking so long but no response was given. So, he eased his way right outside the girl’s bathroom door calling her name but, didn’t hear a reply back. He then went to other parts close to where the bathroom was in expectations of finding her. Unfortunately, he didn’t know that what had happened was that as my mom was waiting for me right outside the bathroom. I had started looking for her but, somehow I had missed her or passed by, without knowing that she was there. Since, there were tons of people that

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