Personal Narrative-Heroic Pool

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I tremble, walk into the room full of audiences, staring at me. I climb up the ladder to the highest board, the 10-meter board. While everyone looks at me, I look at them, I take a big breath, run at a rhythmic pace until I jump. I do 3 triple flips, and then... SPLASH! I dive perfectly into the cold, deep pool. My ears are clogged and my mind is winding with questions. I swim up and see that everyone is cheering for me. It's until then, I check the leaderboard. The highest score you can get is a 100%. I got a score of 99%!!! I'm in first place! I get out of the pool and go find my coach. She looks super happy, and gives me a huge hug, even though I'm still wet. It's done, I made it. Then someone else comes up. It's Sara Turnpeak. She was the

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