Personal Narrative-Frat Boy

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I manage to look at the kid and connect eyes with him. He’s smiling, as if he is doing something good for his daddy, typical. “Is that all you got blonde?” I say managing to smirk. He looked at me angrily and raised his fist for another blow, but before he can the sound of glass shattering stops him and he turned towards the noise.
Lex charges at frat boy with sledge hammer in hand. He takes a swing at him to which the frat boy stop instantly with his hand. How the hell? This surprises Lex, the frat boy then hits him with his left elbow, taking the sledge hammer from Lex’s simultaneously. He swings down and hits Lex’s left leg knocking him to the ground. Lex screams in pain as frat boy smiles at his work.
“Come on,” frat boy yells throwing
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This time frat boy lunges at him and Lex manages to duck out of the way. Lex swiftly turns himself around to meet frat boys back and wraps his arm around his neck and starts to squeeze. Frat boy tries to get free, but Lex is too strong and in matter of seconds’ frat boy passes out on the ground.
Without hesitation, Lex runs towards me and leans down eye level to me, vision in my left eye is so blurred I can hardly see him, “Oh, Freckles, I’m so sorry.” I hear anger in his voice but I can tell he’s crying too. “I’m gonna fix this, this creep doesn’t deserve to
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There’s three men that walk up to us, the middle who looks like a cartoon smiles widely, while two others, one on each side of his wear motionless faces. “We’re just getting started,” the one in the middle says, “But a good start, you passed the test. You may have not killed him, sadly, but you still passed.”
“Why would I kill him?” Lex asked.
“Because, that’s what you do.” he sighs, then turns to me. “I do apologize miss Ellie, but if it’s any consolation you passed too. Oh, and by the way I’m Theodore, but please, call me Vice. Now, it’s finally time to meet the man in charge.”
Lex stood to his feet awkwardly, “No, now you let us go.”
Theodore rolls his eyes and sighs softly, “No, no, you don’t get to go, not yet. Boys!” the two men standing behind him walk up and grab Lex, who shoves away from them, but is quickly and easily handled by the two six-foot something tall men. One of the men then take a tiny needle full of a blue liquid and inject it into Lex’s injured leg, instantly knocking him out.
“Don’t worry,” Theodore says. “He’ll be fine.” The two men then walk over to me, one of them taking out another needle.
“Why are you doing this?” I ask.
He strokes his beard gently, “Because you two, are the main pieces to our game.” I feel the needle inject into the left side of my face. My eyes grow blurry and then

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