Fractured Wrist By: Charles Roberts (Control)
To this day I still remember everything clearly like it all happened a month ago, but at least I don’t remember the pain. There were so many things I could have done differently, but what happened has happened; no control. Back in 6th grade around late August, early September where it all started. It was an alright day at school like most days, nothing major really happened. The day kind of hard to remember, just because it was a regular day, but my friend did invite me to his house for his birthday.
I Asked my mom and she was alright with me going, I'm pretty sure I stayed over too with the other people going. This wasn’t the first time going and mom and his parents got along well. I don’t really …show more content…
We continued to play games then later on ate, it was pretty fun and I think the first time I've been to his house on his birthday. The rest of day I forget except I think going outside or something to play soccer, or other things to do outside. After that whole day, we went inside to watch Netflix and… chill; as friends. Before watching Netflix we were doing random things, that I don't remember. We started to watch Stranger Things, then went to sleep scared.
Do I need to explain anything better The next day is when everything had started. My friend's dad had bought us donuts, and side note my friends birthday was like a week later from his birthday. After eating we went outside to play soccer again, midway through I'll cut it short; I fell on my wrist. It was tragic.I heard the crunch sound, and as I was in pain my friends started to laugh. I wish I had some sort of control over what happened. They didn't understand what was going on with me. When they finally realized that it was serious, my friend’s mom got involved and gave me a cast.
Are my transitions good I'd cut the party short, and got picked up by my mom later. The next day I was in major pain and went to see a doctor. I found out I fractured my wrist, then another had gone to find someone to make me a cast. I used my friend's mom's cheap cast for a week or so at school until I got my cast. This was the story of how I fractured my
To this day I still remember everything clearly like it all happened a month ago, but at least I don’t remember the pain. There were so many things I could have done differently, but what happened has happened; no control. Back in 6th grade around late August, early September where it all started. It was an alright day at school like most days, nothing major really happened. The day kind of hard to remember, just because it was a regular day, but my friend did invite me to his house for his birthday.
I Asked my mom and she was alright with me going, I'm pretty sure I stayed over too with the other people going. This wasn’t the first time going and mom and his parents got along well. I don’t really …show more content…
We continued to play games then later on ate, it was pretty fun and I think the first time I've been to his house on his birthday. The rest of day I forget except I think going outside or something to play soccer, or other things to do outside. After that whole day, we went inside to watch Netflix and… chill; as friends. Before watching Netflix we were doing random things, that I don't remember. We started to watch Stranger Things, then went to sleep scared.
Do I need to explain anything better The next day is when everything had started. My friend's dad had bought us donuts, and side note my friends birthday was like a week later from his birthday. After eating we went outside to play soccer again, midway through I'll cut it short; I fell on my wrist. It was tragic.I heard the crunch sound, and as I was in pain my friends started to laugh. I wish I had some sort of control over what happened. They didn't understand what was going on with me. When they finally realized that it was serious, my friend’s mom got involved and gave me a cast.
Are my transitions good I'd cut the party short, and got picked up by my mom later. The next day I was in major pain and went to see a doctor. I found out I fractured my wrist, then another had gone to find someone to make me a cast. I used my friend's mom's cheap cast for a week or so at school until I got my cast. This was the story of how I fractured my