Personal Narrative-First Day At The Lake

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First Day at the Lake

“Brooklyn, wake up. It's time to get up and get dressed and get ready to leave.” My dad said as he shook me awake. It was mid summer and my plane awaits my family and I. As I rolled over and opened my eyes, looking at my alarm clock, I noticed it was 4:08am. I was really excited to get up and get ready to leave. “We leave in 20 minutes, hurry up and get dressed and finish up your last minute packing.” My dad yelled from the bottom of the stairs to my brothers and I. “And Braxt don't forget to brush your teeth!” My dad added.
Braxt is my younger brother. His full name is Braxton but we call him Braxt for short. Braxt is 10 years old, 3 years younger than me. He loves the lake house, he mostly loves it because
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“I'll race you back to the bunkhouse!” We took off running and pushing each other, Cody won. “Ah! I won.” Cody said. “I'm to tired to run.” I said as I tried to catch my breath. “Brooklyn, Cody, get everyone out of the bunkhouse, dinners ready.” Uncle Sam yelled to us. Cody and I walked up the steps. “Guys, time for dinner.” Cody said as he walked in the bunkhouse. “Okay. Were coming.” Strait yelled as he got up from the bed he was laying on. Cody started running down the stairs, as he ran down the stairs, he slipped and hit his head. “Cody, are you okay?” I asked. I got no response. “Cody, Cody, Cody!” I said as my voice got louder. Strait walked out of the bunk house. “Strait. Hurry, run and go get Dad. He’s hurt!” Strait ran down the stairs, going around Cody. My heart dropped as thoughts of what if this is it for him and it messed him up for the rest of this life. “Boo!” Cody said, sitting up.
“Ah” I screamed. “What. Are you kidding me? I hate you!” I yelled as I walked passed him. “Strait. He was faking it.” “Haha, he got you good.” Strait said laughing. “Oh my gosh, you should have seen your face!” Cody said laughing hard. “It's not funny, you could have been seriously hurt.” I said with a mad look on my

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