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“Where am I at?” I asked. I had no clue where I was, I didn’t know what time of day it was or what day it was. All I know is that there was a little bit of sunlight coming through a crack in a wall. There were lots of walls it kinda looked like a maze, it smelled really bad, and it was freezing. I had no clue what happened. Then I got a random flashback. I was in my room and I heard my mom yell “HIDE!”
After I heard her yell hide I ran into my hiding place that I go into to read and get away from my family. It was a little room in my closet that was covered up with clothes and blankets that no one could ever find. Well until one day I was running in there and when I shut the door it slammed and the guys in my house came in their. I tried
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It looked like a hot dog and some mac and cheese. They gave me some lemonade to drink it with. It wasn’t that bad at all. I could have eaten like three helpings of it. They person with only one hand came back and picked up my tray. At that time it was sitting in the sink by the other wall away from the door. When he was walking over there I made a run for it. I ran past another holding cell and it had Lilly in it, I tried to get her out, but when I did someone came behind me and hit me in the head. I couldn’t tell who it was because I was turned the other …show more content…
All of a sudden I started seeing the red liquid again. I wanted to find out what it was so I tasted it and it was water but just colored red. Then I saw a wooden bat floating my way. It had something red on it, this time I knew it was blood. I started freaking out because I didn’t know whose it was. I heard a scream coming down the hall.
Then I heard Katie yell, “No, someone help please!”
I couldn’t do anything, but then I saw her walking down the hallway with blood running down her head. She unlocked my door. I got out and started running toward my sister's cells with the key to unlock them.
I got there and they were both sleeping, I was like “How did they sleep through all of that?” I ran into Rose’s room and I woke her up and got her out. After that Rose and I ran into Lilly's room and woke her up. We started running out of the old barn it was pitch black outside. We all started running the all of a sudden we heard a dog bark. We started running even faster.
Once we ran out I heard Katie yell, “Help someone come get me out of

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