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The scenery around me was so jaw dropping I almost forgot about all the little pinches I was getting. They were just a pinch, like a needle but it hurt so bad. Nothing like I ever experienced before. The city was filled with people not bugs!!
Tamara finally asked, “Why are you itching and swatting all over?” I said, “I’m being attacked by some weird insects.” “It might be mosquitos, gnats, or just plain bugs.” Tamara said. I had no idea what those were but I didn’t want to sound like a complete fool. I asked Tamara, “Why are they biting me?” She asked, “Are you wearing any scented products?” I said, “I’m just wearing scented hand lotion why?” Tamara explained that the mosquitos are attracted to scents. Then I felt like a total idiot and

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