Personal Narrative Fiction

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“ I can’t believe we're finally here! I can’t wait to see the funny, big eared mouse.”

I was sitting at my kitchen table where I was struggling with my homework.

“ I don’t get, I just don’t get!” That’s when my mom and dad came walking into the room with a different face, like they were hiding something. “ I have homework due Monday, science, math, reading and writing.”

My mom had the strangest face like she was going to blow, like a volcano. Then looked at my dad.

“ You’re not going to be there Monday.”

“Why?”

“ Because we’re all going somewhere far away from home, for a vacation.”

I thought in my head where could we be going? They also said that
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“ We’re going to get up at the same time as usual, and leave after dinner, around 6:30ish, and get there around 9:30-10:00.

“ Ok.” My sister and I said at the exact same time.

Soon enough the night was over and it was around 6:00. Mom was right! Right after dinner she loaded our things into the car like, books, electronics, and coloring tools to keep us busy in the 3 hour ride. We were in the car for about 2 hours. Right after my dad asked if anyone needed to use the restroom when he saw a stop. Everyone said they were fine. Then my sister, Avery had to go 10 minutes after he asked. I had my earbuds in listening to my favorite music, so I couldn't really hear anything.

Finally after all that was over about 1 hour later of boringness we were here………… AT A HOTEL!!!!!!!!! I was
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It read….. “ You’ll be 2 weeks on your entertaining vacation.” Then I turned to my dad and said……

“Are we really only spending 1 week on vacation?!?!’’ “ No.’’ he said back to me and my sister Avery.

Now I can’t wait for tomorrow!! :)

It’s Tomorrow!!!! My parents woke my sister and me up at 5:30 in the morning to get dresses, eat , and then go to the airport. We went down stairs with all of our stuff, and ate the yummiest blueberry muffin ever, with a side of scrambled eggs. Then after we ate we went on a bus to get to the airport, Then got on the airplane. When we landed my parents told us that they had to lead the way. I don’t know why.

We took a few turns left, right,right,left. My dad was recording the whole time for some reason. Then my dad pointed behind us at a sign that read……

“ This bus will be taking you to the DISNEY CRUISE!!!!” I was literally jumping up and down in the line, hugging my mom and dad with all my might.
My sister and I were screaming so loud it almost shattered my eardrums. As I was waiting in the line for the bus I was thinking, what’s going to be on the cruise? Am I going to make any new

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