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My eyes felt like they were glued shut like I couldn’t open them no matter how hard I tried. I was in a different place, it wasn’t home and I felt my heart start to beat fast, I was getting scared these surroundings weren’t familiar to me and all I wanted to do was go home. I heard a scream, it sounded like a girl and it was getting closer and closer, my hands started to shake and my stomach dropped. I couldn’t think straight, all I could think about is the girl, the sound of how fast my heart was beating and the shakiness of my hands. I don’t even know where I am. How did I end up here? All of the sudden I couldn’t see straight anymore and my vision felt blurry and all I could see is black.
Hi, I should introduce myself, I’m Louisa, I’m seventeen
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“Yes, mom?” I hope this conversation was over quick.
She looked at me with this glare, like looking at me was a hard task. “Do you remember what you were supposed to do today?” She spat out angrily.
I tried to think if I had to do something today, but nothing came to my mind. “Um, no?” I said. She suddenly got up and got into my face.
“You were supposed to go get my medication! Do you ever remember anything? I need them Louisa! I asked you one little task to do that wasn’t even hard, I never ask you for anything, but one time I do you forgot. You’re a piece of shit! I wish you were never my daughter.”
“Mom, what did I do? I’m sorry. I’ll go get your pills right now.” I tried not to
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I started walking towards the door and opened it and went to Anthony’s dorm I needed to get my stuff. I started to run I needed to get there faster I couldn't really remember where his dorm was I was so fucked up, but I needed to get out of here. Suddenly I heard a scream I stopped and turned around. It was a girl she was running after me.
"Can I help you?" I shouted hoping she would hear me. She finally got closer.
"Yeah, Are you leaving by chance?" She asked nervously. I looked at her she was shaking. I couldn't possibly say no.
"Sure, do you need anything though? I kind of need to get out of here quick.
"Nope!." She gave me this weird smile, it kind of look forced. I turned around and starting walking towards Anthony's dorm. The girl behind me looked so familiar I turned around to ask her a question and she was gone. "What the hell.?" I heard a scream. I don't even know what's happening right now, maybe it was the pills I took. I decided to ignore it and started to walk again when I heard something and turned around. It was the girl.
"Hey remember me? Do I look familiar to you?"
"No." I replied confused.
"You don't know who I look like at all?" She started to get closer and I took off and decided just to go to my car I hurried and unlocked it and started the engine. Somehow the girl caught up and she was in front of my

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