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Casey and Abby eventually say their good nights and head home, Bryna heads up to her old room to go to sleep. I was not ready for bed and was still sipping on some coffee I had made. After tonight, I needed to feel a little bit more of Jack with me so I brewed a small pot, and grabbed Jacks favorite red coffee cup from the shelf. I poured a seconds glass for Flynn and we move our conversation to the front porch.
“You don’t have to stay. I’m sure you are tired.” I say taking a seat
“No, I’m fine... I think I am still coming off the adrenaline of the day.”
“Flynn, you did an amazing job. Jack would be truly proud of everything you were able to pull off today.” “I can’t take any of the credit, it was all his idea. He would go on and on about
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After Jack got home, he was limited on his excitement to tell me about the weekend and then two weeks later when I got our visa bill it showed a charge for the Rivers Edge Motel. When I asked Jack about it he said that Flynn met someone girl at the bar they stopped at along the river and Flynn hooked up with her. Jack claimed that Flynn didn’t have his wallet on him so he gave Flynn our credit card and that he would pay us back.
The story did not make sense to me since Flynn had been kind of dating someone at the time and Flynn didn’t seem the type to cheat. I was a little suspicious until later that day Flynn popped by with the amount of the charge and gave it the Jack; I walked in on the conversation and asked what was going on. When Flynn blushes at my question and told me he owed Jack some money I believed the
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He rented a motel room for an out of town job and used the wrong credit card to pay for it.” Flynn explains
“I can’t believe that is the story he came up with.” I replied laughing
“No kidding, I was pretty pissed, I of course played along so he would blow his cover.”
“I suppose that clears that up, and I’m so glad that you didn’t hook-up with a random chick, I actually thought less of you after I heard that.”
“I know I could see it in your eye when you looked at me that day.” He says as he takes his last sip of wine avoiding eye contact.
“So, are you going to let me in on the rest of Jack’s plan?” I ask bring the conversation back to something a little more comfortable
“Nope”
“No? Why not”
“Because he wanted it all to play out a certain way and I’m going to do my best to help him with that.”
“Ok so then what was his next step?”
“I’m not going to give you any details yet, I will give you some warning when the next item is coming.” Flynn says and then pauses for a

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