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I scream as I saw my family dead. The white walls were now red. My dad was on the floor torn to shreds. Mother was in the kitchen floor with her face scratched out. My brothers throat torn out. I didn't know what to say. Everything was blank. My adrenaline rushing, I ran out calling for help. I had to leave. I couldn't bare to look at them like this anymore. I was internally screaming, why but my body was silent and crying quietly. I crouched down outside with blood on my hands from the moment I touched my mother's hand. I could hear the footsteps coming as I was on the ground. Something touched my shoulder and I shot up fast to my feet.
"You need to leave now."
All I could do was look at the strange man with the expensive suit. I couldn't
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I also know that you have nowhere to go. I recommend your aunts."
"You still haven't answered my question, and how do you know all this?" I said in a harsh tone.
He took out a cigar and lite it. Having no care in the world. His eyes always on me. "My name is James, and I should say for your safety to run. Run as fast as you can. Or they will kill you to." He said calmly.
I stared at him in disbelief. "Kill me? Why! My family is dead and now I have to run for my life?!" I heard sirens coming my way.
"Not all cops are good dawn." Just like that. He was gone. Fear came in me and I ran. I ran as fast as I could into the woods. Not knowing where, not knowing why, but all I could think of was to keep going. Keep going until my feet couldn't anymore. Keep going until I can't feel my legs. I fell, after it seems hours of running not knowing where I was. I was out of breath, panting hard. I fell to the floor and leaned against a tree. My throat was dry and legs were scratched up. Hair with leaves and dirt. Few cuts in my face when I fell. I couldn't go any further. I'm going to die. And dying sounded beautiful to me right now. Dark spots clouded my vision. With that I faded out and just saw
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White, wrinkled bed sheets that reeked like musty old plastic gloves. The handcuffs tightening my fragile anorexic wrists. I clenched on too metal bars as my chest leaped forward. Where was I? My eyes twitched to the nonstop shimmering jerks as if someone was purposely flickering the lights as that a child would. My eyes widen as I took a careful look into the deep distance. Something in the shadows watched me. My wrists covered in purple marks bleed with frustration, I yanked again. My saliva slowly accumulated and I swallowed. My heart pounded harder than the hunting footsteps of the man named James. Lingering in my thoughts, I pushed him aside. My shoulder reached my cheek whipping my hair way. My neck shook as shivers ran down my spin. Before my eyes reached the door, the shadow moved yet again. My breath

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