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"What are you going to do?” Tim asked. “I’m not sure!” Camila shouted while frantically searching the room for something, anything that could be of use at this point. “I need more time.” “Let me know when you figure it out!” Tim exclaimed being sarcastic while trying not to sound too nervous. “I found a hammer!” Camila shouted excitedly. “How is that going to help this situation?” Tim asked sounding more nervous every second that goes by. “It might not but I’m desperate at this point!” Camila said fighting back the tears and they start to ball up in the crease of her eyelid. Camila yanked the hammer from the floor and started viciously beating the door with it. Tim backs away from the door, praying that maybe it will fly open and he will be reunited with Camila again. When the bludgeoning …show more content…
Tim has always been seemed to stick out among his school. Although Tim has always been more of an observer, most people seem to know him. He is kind to everyone in school and participates in soccer, basketball, and baseball. He’s a very sophisticated kid for his age. Tim has smooth, dark-brown hair that seems to always be in place. He’s very lean for being 6-foot, 5-inches. This kind of height is uncommon where he lives. In Salt Lake City, Utah most people are more around 6-foot. Here he lives with two aggravating little brothers and an obnoxious, older sister that doesn’t want anything to do with him half of the time anyway. His real role model in the family is his mom though. She is a beautiful women; she is dainty but very impressionable. He adores her maternal instincts. He admires his father as well but, his dad is always doing his own thing. He gets the sense that the house has just been peculiar lately. Tim has noticed his father sneaking around lately, including sneaking out of the house. He doesn’t explain himself when he gets back either. But Tim’s reasoning is, his father wouldn’t be doing anything bad… Or would

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