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puh puh puh puh. that's all I could here as I ran for what felt like my life. welts on my back and legs. Yep it had been a bad night. Just an hour or two earlier me and my friends had been planning for a perfect halloween strategy for candy. “We should go to stirrup first” “No we should go around pond ridge” We all argued. And then we finally had it. We were just going to stirrup then pond ridge then so on. we were going to hit so many houses I lost count. I quit counting after 20 but you get the point. We were almost ready to go. 30 minutes until we could start. I AM SO PUMPED!!!

Finally the clock struck 6 and we could go get some free candy. up the street hitting all the houses we can on the way. We were at the top of the street. It

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