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Margot a little girl she thinks that a huge, bright orb will come out behind the clouds called the sun.
She says “it’s so bright that you can’t look at it very long or else your eyes will burn right off”.
But I don’t believe her it has been raining forever and no sign of “the sun”. She was different she never hung out with us, not that I would want her to. She just stood there looking out the window waiting for this imaginary “sun
We read a book about it in class it had to be real now they said that the sun will come out tomorrow.
It’s the next day and I’m now like Margot looking out the window waiting for the sun to come out but it never does I mad now
“They tricked us”, I said angrily I was so mad that had a plan, we would put Margot in the closet and not let her out till the next morning so that's exactly what we did, we pushed her into the closet and we shut it so hard that she had no chance of escaping. We heard her banging we still didn’t let her out.
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Then I felt wet like I had just got in the shower It was raining again and it got cloudy again we all went back into the classroom.
As we all sat down I realized that Margot was still in the closet we all came rushing down I opened the door slowly then even more slowly let out Margot. I could see the disappointment in her face She ran to the window well crying and she put her hands on the window as if she was in a jail cell trying to get out she fell to the ground I came over to her
I said, “Are you

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