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“Got it.” Shreya still felt a bit woozy from her slam into the ground.

“We need to go and kill more people. That way, we can kill all the police departments nearby. Then, we go and kill the presidents of all the different countries, and get voted in as all the new presidents.”

“Great plan,” Shreya agreed, still not knowing that Raven was planning to kill her. They headed off to town.

Jamie was climbing out of the closet. She heard many landing thuds, and got scared. Don’t worry. It’s just the killer being captured, and the killer is fighting. She chided herself. She heard the front door slam. A couple minutes later, she heard 2 people exit the house, still talking. Jamie ran downstairs, and found no trace of anyone in the house. Jamie opened the door, and since she was the sporty twin, ran half of the way, and jogged half of the way to the police department. She got there in 20 minutes. She found Kayla crying as 2 policemen tried to calm her. “Kayla!” Jamie called out. The
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“What happened? And why are you panting really hard?”

“I ran from the mansion after everyone left. Before you tell me your side of the story, I need to tell the police something,” Jamie looked up, “Where are the others?” she asked.

“Billy here escaped before he shared the fate of his fellow policemen,” one of the policemen responded, pointing at the other policeman.

“Oh.” Jamie’s face showed depression. “Well, anyway, do you know someone called “Raven” that lives in Dab Town?”

“Raven, huh, let me go search on the police files to see if Raven has ever lived in Dab Town before,” Billy left the room. A few minutes later, he came back. “There’s a Raven Dabinati that lives here. She has a sister, the new mayor, called Shreya Dabinati. I printed out Raven’s picture from the files, here,” Billy handed Jamie a photo that looked exactly like Raven, or the person who was dressed in black at the

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