Personal Narrative-Feliciano

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I opened my eyes to see a name bar in front of me. I typed in the name “Feliciano” because, well, that my human name. The world went dark for a few seconds until I opened my eyes. I was in a small town and I saw many other people there too, some just getting into the game. I decided to look at my inventory. I didn’t know how until I watched how the others opened theirs. I tried the motion that they were doing and it worked. As I thought, the inventory was mostly bare. What I didn’t expect was that there was a convenient mirror as my only item. I took it out and decided to see if anything about me changed. When I looked in the mirror, I saw a whole new person. My curl was gone and I had the same hairstyle, except that my hair was crimson in

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