Personal Narrative-Fat Pool Water

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Pushing through the dense pool water, I try to be the first to reach the finish line. I bob up and my head breaks the surface of the water so I can obtain a small gasp of air, I hear the crown roaring and cheering. I then dip back down to continue my quest to come out on top. My heart is racing faster than the speed of light. I believe I can do it. I continue to kick and paddle as I glide through the water as fast as I can. Finally, I reach my hand out to grab the edge. I’ve made it to the

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