Personal Narrative Essay

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“Ouch, this life jacket is super tight on me,” Elias yelped with so much pain he couldn’t bear to live with. It was 6:00 on a Friday night football game, 2015. It was Beach night for the student section and we were wearing life jackets, goggles, scuba gear, and my friend Elias with his pink water shoes and pink lifejacket. We hopped on our bikes and started to ride to the game. There is something about me and my friends that we do as an inside joke. Who would have ever thought that making a funny face could led to a high speed chase? There we were riding along on our mountain bikes on a street road, looking like a couple of idiots dressed up for the student section not caring about who saw us. It was a scorching ninety-five degrees in the …show more content…
I was coming up to the corner and whipped my head back with a frightening look on my face. I saw Elias, the teenagers about to… I zoomed around the corner of the MPR Gym and almost smashed a car with my bike, Honk! Honnnk!!!
“Watch out kid,” the middle-aged man yelled in his car.
I should’ve stopped but I didn’t. I finally managed to go behind the RAC and I decided to hide there until Elias showed up but, that may not happen for awhile. Was this the end of my friend. Was his life over. As I pondered on constant questions I didn’t know how I was going to ever live. All I could do was…I heard a noise, the noise of a angels flying down from heaven. I heard the wheels of a chariot come down from heaven that moment. It was my dear friend Elias Gass. The biggest sigh of relief came over me just as if you were holding your breath going past a cemetery trying not to breath, although no one knows why you do that,
“Dude you okay,” I asked.
“Dude I was trying to peddle faster but I couldn’t because my right toe hurt. They got so close to me like they were going to hit me and then they sped off,”
Elias said with a fearful look in his eyes. I still wondered why he made the face and decided to ask

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