Personal Narrative Essay

Improved Essays
It's Friday at Glendale Elementary school and that means it's Friday friendship friend of the week, day in Ms. Day’s class where the kids vote on who was the friend of the week with the winner getting a 150 mini chocolate bar bag prize. Susie had never won the Friday friendship friend of the week but this week was going to be different. Susie's friend Johnny had always won every Friday and she had never come close. Susie thought to herself I have to do something different than just being nice because Johnny is always the nicest. It was then sitting at her desk she made the perfect plan and begun to smile at the thought of her 150 mini chocolate bar prize. At recess Susie went to Johnny and asked Hi best friend will you vote for me if I give you a candy bar? Johnny being a rule follower said No Susie …show more content…
Defeated Susie clean up her mountain of wrappers and while washing up she thought of a plan to finish rest of her candy. While her mom was busy with making dinner Susie snuck back in the living room ripped open her candy bag and ate all of it like a mad dog then snuck back to wash away the evidence. Once clean Susie picked up her dog Fuzzball snuck back in the living room placing him near the scene of the crime. Oh no Fuzzball ate all of my candy! Susie cried doing her best-disappointed face. Susie's mom rushed into the living room checking on Fuzzball with fear in her eyes. We have to get him to the vet immediately. Susie's mom said as she rushed them to the car. Susie confused from the backseat of the speeding car as to why her mom is so scared asked what wrong mommy why are we going to the vet? Susie's mom on the phone with the vet almost in tears told them he ate a half a bag of chocolate he's a tiny Maltipoo I'm bringing him in right

Related Documents

  • Improved Essays

    “Okay we only have four dollars left” thankfully there mom gave them enough money to ride the rides for free so they could spend their money on food or souvenirs. After they finished the funnel cake they realized they were thirsty so that’s what they spent the four dollars on. “Now let’s go ride all the rides” Max said “Okay” Sam said though he thought it was not a very good idea. After riding all the rides Sam felt sick, “I’m going to go to the bathroom” Sam said “Okay I will wait here” said Max. After Sam had gone to the bathroom he was walking and not looking at the ground but then he tripped.…

    • 420 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Cutter Coverdale Second hour One Ordinary Day, With Empty Gum Wrappers Mr. Johnson slammed his door shut and came down the stairs into a super bright sunny day; a little too bright, Mr. Johnson did not like it. He proceeds to walk across the street to the newsstand and the corner store where he walked in and bought some gum took out all the actual gum and threw it in the street and stuck the wrappers in his pocket. He then saw a little black poodle with a white sock, walking in the streets, he kneeled down and picked it up.…

    • 733 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Chocolate Fa Monologue

    • 1275 Words
    • 6 Pages

    Once there was a little boy, his name was Charlie. Charlie was poor and he lived with his mom and his grandparents. He would always save up money to buy a chocolate bar, because In five of the chocolate bars, there was a golden ticket. Whoever gets a golden ticket, wins a tour of Willy Wonka’s Chocolate Fa-a-a-ctory!…

    • 1275 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Columbine Shooting Thesis

    • 936 Words
    • 4 Pages

    Eric and Dylan had a presentation in school they made a video about bullying but first Rachel did her presentation on her faith and what she believed in and how she got through everything. Dylan and Eric was making a video on bullying, they had guns on the school ground in the video, and Rachel asked the teacher “Do we have to watch this?” Rachel was a little scared and did not want to watch something like at school. When class ended Rachel was walking up the stairs and Dylan and Eric stopped her and said, “You think you are better than us?” she replied, “No I don’t think I am better than anyone.…

    • 936 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Decent Essays

    The day is very normal ,nothing special,Johnny and ponyboy are best friends, one day they were very bored so they decided go to see a movie with some of the gang members he greaser! While in the movie theater Johnny and ponyboy pick on 2 socs named Sherri (Cherry) and Marcia. Soon they were having a conversation, and then they decided to walk those Socs home. However, things went well until a Soc believe are their boyfriend named BoB got angry of them so they drop the girls off. Later Ponyboy is going home and johnny is going to rest at the park because he do not want to go home because his parent don’t care about him.…

    • 200 Words
    • 1 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Iziquel The Tomb

    • 1333 Words
    • 6 Pages

    The thief found himself in front of the tomb of Emperor Iziquel The Destroyer. The tomb was not his interest, instead it was the box on top of it. Iziquel the destroyer’s spirit rose from this tomb watching the thief, “I am Arch Thief Varthalmul, I am here to take your legacy and make it my own, now BE GONE!” The room turned dark then when the light turned visible the box was gone and all was lost. Iziquel the destroyer stood there smiling, then disappeared in the darkness.…

    • 1333 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    One sunny day three girls were walking a dog in a neighborhood. As they were walking the came across house that was rumored that a child kidnapper who lowered kids in with candy lived there. They started to dare each other to go up to the house, but each one chickened out. The house was quite scary, for it had a broken window and fence. The girls started to walk quickly for they didn’t want to stay by the ugly house that belonged to a criminal for too long.…

    • 546 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Unaware, Leea ran happily to hand the little boy a balloon. The Pitbull darted towards her… Saved by a blessing, our dog, shooter jumped in-between the two and took the blow. The Pitbull clinched down on shooters neck, flailing him around. Scared, I ran inside to tell grandpa what happened. “Grandpa!…

    • 275 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The House on Maple Street There was a new kid named Adam that just moved from Tennessee. It was his first day in the neighborhood, a couple of kids walked by him giving him dirty looks. He never knew what was wrong with him, but then a few days later a kid named Kevin said “There has been things that has happened in your house that no one is happy about.” Adam asked” What happened?”…

    • 362 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Personal Narrative Essay

    • 673 Words
    • 3 Pages

    On 06/01/2018 at approximately 1654 hrs. , I responded to the 100 blk of S Main St in reference to a drunk male without a shirt on harassing people walking while being aggressive. The caller advised the male also cornered two young women of the street and was harassing people in their vehicles. I made contact with the male without a shirt on and identified him as Boyd Douglas Wagner, W/M, DOB 06/23/1975. Wagner had a strong odor of intoxicants coming from his person.…

    • 673 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Superior Essays

    Toddler Observation Paper

    • 1731 Words
    • 7 Pages

    The toddlers were running around after each other, when a little girl (will be named Alexa) fell and started crying, she had a little scrap on her knee. Alexa’s mother came in to see why her daughter was crying, Mark went up to Alexa and gave a little kiss to her “booboo” as Mark called it. Mark then told her “all better”. Mark then proceed to lift his t-shirt sleeve to show her a “booboo” as he called it. Alexa’s mother told her daughter to say thank you and give Mark a hug, Alexa proceed but stayed very close to her mother.…

    • 1731 Words
    • 7 Pages
    Superior Essays
  • Decent Essays

    The Night of Halloween Smudging on the last of the oily paint to her face, she slipped on her vibrant orange pumpkin costume and placed the viney green on her head. As she collected her pail that she would place her candy in. She ran down the grainy wood steps and yelled for her mom. Her mom soon appeared by the stairwell and opened the cold doorknob and let her out the door. When her feet hit the grey hard pavement she was disoriented as she was walking.…

    • 696 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Personal Narrative Essay

    • 1412 Words
    • 6 Pages

    “How long have I slept,” thinks Becky as she wakes up. “What a horrid dream.” She stretches and is surprised at how sore her muscles are. She rolls over and yelps, her eyes pop open.…

    • 1412 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    After gymnastics practice, Kendall excitingly ran into the car and said to her mother, “Mom guess what, Sarah came to me and started disturbing me, I just told Sarah to back off and she was so surprised she didn’t disturb me in my whole practice.” Her mom thought, finally my daughter could defend herself and to cheer her she bought Kendall ice cream and said “Oh! honey, I am so proud of you, you totally deserved this,” said her mom gladly. They went home and after Kendall took of her gym clothes and put on some comfy clothes, she went downstairs and took out her binder and did her homework. As usual, after finishing her homework Kendall started watching the news.…

    • 435 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Personal Narrative Essay

    • 866 Words
    • 4 Pages

    Billy, a scrawny, but energetic second grader, sat nearest to the front entrance of our middle-sized classroom. “Shhh!” “Here she comes!” He shouted, “Hurry up everybody!” “Run and jump in your seats!”…

    • 866 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays